tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1533302017861295483.post7113473666505586680..comments2023-10-24T05:25:04.114+08:00Comments on .:: aS THe WoRLD TuRNS GReeN ::.: Charmed Ones: Part 3Izhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17310692584473275641noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1533302017861295483.post-68722652995564655422012-09-05T19:40:00.542+08:002012-09-05T19:40:00.542+08:00Fafa likes bad boy kinda guy. We'll see how th...Fafa likes bad boy kinda guy. We'll see how they react to this secret okay. HuhuIzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17310692584473275641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1533302017861295483.post-75396133865895234972012-09-05T15:11:04.809+08:002012-09-05T15:11:04.809+08:00wow,Connor is quite 'cepi' don't u thi...wow,Connor is quite 'cepi' don't u think? he figured out the secret quite fast,hehe. Charlie is coollll! can't wait to know how Charlie accepts the fact that he is a wizard XDfafanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1533302017861295483.post-71676978948857009432012-09-05T10:29:38.704+08:002012-09-05T10:29:38.704+08:00Thank you, Anonyous person. I think I get what u m...Thank you, Anonyous person. I think I get what u meant. I'm still new with descriptions that's why u could see they're tons of dialog instead of storytelling I guess. I'll put that in mind when I write the next installment. Izhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17310692584473275641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1533302017861295483.post-4745143720746449132012-09-05T07:14:06.596+08:002012-09-05T07:14:06.596+08:00hmm. it seems that I can really see some of yourse...hmm. it seems that I can really see some of yourself in the story Iz. haha. it's practically has "izdihar" written all over it. I think the story is quite good. save for the fact that it would not hurt to describe some of the things more, explore your adjectives more izdihar. hah. that's frankly because I do quite favor a more detailing description of a scene lah. that's why. hehe.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com